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    Need Constructive Criticism.....



    Yes, this video is a little long so you can listen to some parts.....

    Im starting on doing commentaries and lets plays and im open to criticism....I try to be funny TRY,

    I just need peoples feedback so i know what im doing wrong and can fix it and improve on what im doing right...Here im just doing a let's play/Review of a PC game called Driving Simulator 2011....

    I know i might sound annoying or i make verbal mistakes....Just point out stuff I can make better...I think i have a bright future as a YouTuber....
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    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a3LLFYpAYak Driving Simulator 2011???
    The guy below me hopefully knows what i mean...

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    There is also a part one as-well....
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a3LLFYpAYak Driving Simulator 2011???
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    I admit, I'm not a fan of Let's Play videos. I only watch Game Grumps and mostly for the commentary. Jon and Arin often have funny or interesting things to say (relevant or not) rather than just react to the game they're playing. That said, I only watched the first half of both videos you posted and it got boring.

    But that's just my opinion. It might be easier if you started playing a game you really enjoyed or hated. It would give you more to say in your videos.
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    It's nice... But clearing up the vice over and that will work fine...

    you'r last video's you did and i said were good and i meant that, so take from that
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    Quote Originally Posted by Blacksite View Post
    I admit, I'm not a fan of Let's Play videos. I only watch Game Grumps and mostly for the commentary. Jon and Arin often have funny or interesting things to say (relevant or not) rather than just react to the game they're playing. That said, I only watched the first half of both videos you posted and it got boring.

    But that's just my opinion. It might be easier if you started playing a game you really enjoyed or hated. It would give you more to say in your videos.
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fbb4LuBH5Z4
    I took ur advice and did a game i actually semi-liked....Its called demolition company, i had fun doing the vidoe, it took me like 3-4 takes and wasted like 2-3 hours editing and doing different takes, but anyway yeah, and i am working on fixing my voice-over

    I do feel as if; if you have fun while making the video it will come out better then if your obligated to, and i did play a game i enjoyed....
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=a3LLFYpAYak Driving Simulator 2011???
    The guy below me hopefully knows what i mean...

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